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Critiques
It's nice that you emphasized the intent to make a feline-wolf in your description, since you have created a nice hybrid that is neither truly wolf or great cat. I love it!
I do think there a some improvements to be made, partially in perspective and partially in composition.
Perspective:
the face and expression are actually pretty good - but the nose is on a different angel than the rest of the creature. the face looks as though it should have a three-quarter view, nearly, and that is a hard angle to work in. The tail also seems rather big compared to the head, although that could be deliberate and I wouldn't complain!
Try using a two-point perspective grid and boxing in the face shapes, then filling in the details, it may help. Info on perspective and 2pt perspective can be found here [link] here [link] and here [link]
Composition:
While the overall composition is pretty even throughout, you have a large space near the top, which became mostly background and then a large white frame. If, for example, the tail curved in a more dramatic arc, possibly moving outside the background frame, it would balance the composition more and provide a little more visual interest.
An easy way to see if your drawing has a balanced composition is to look at it in the mirror. I am always surprised by what I see when doing this!
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